Monday, November 14, 2016

writing lucky pencil

description: in writing he have been making random things that sounds like its amazing but really its normal,like a pen that can write what you want but really it is a normal pen. Mine is a lucky pencil, kayla and i choose to make a movie and a story here is my vidio about it .

here is the story

feedback/feedfoward:i think you did well at your story but next tim you could ad a bit more detail. Kayla
Thanks Kayla
Evaluation: i think that next time i should be more clear and talk louder. And ad more detal.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! Great job Naomi! I think your voice is nice and loud!